OuterPace's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Skyriming Dragonballz]

Your art style is a bit satirical and funny, but bad story, bad exhibition, and it seems to be in another language. Wasn't very funny. I suggest, in the future, making jokes come at the viewer just a bit faster. In quicker succession, that is, And make them quick little quirks. Take a look at Oney's "Dragonzball PP." The funny bits are so small, but there are so damn many. Like little face changes, messing up names, failing to say words, and even a millisecond shot of Freeza landing on Vegeta and squeezing his ass. Don't copy Oney's work or anything, just have the "humorous" aspect be quicker, less vulgar, and make more sense.

[Prison Express]

Shatterhand was the greatest NES game ever made.
And this flash isn't bad at all!

[Super Mario bros Z ep.8 (old series)]

Read his newest post on his profile. Sadly, he won't be making any more. However, I do agree that most of his fans from episode 1 have outgrown it to this point. New fans will be dissappointed, but that's just a price to pay.

[The Noob Adventures Episode 10]

That quote is from They Live in 1988, not Duke Nukem. Anyway, love the episodes. However, I'd appreciate a bit longer episodes, and I understand that comes with a longer production time.

[Stickman Can't Fight 5]

Very original!

I thought it was really funny. The memes made it even better. And by the way, about the guy below me, no one watching flash movies are in a rush... Haha.

"Something like that,"
"cool"

guitan11 responds:

Glad that you enjoyed the memes, but I'll be cutting bak a little on those. :3 I want a happy medium ;)

[Mafia Madness 3: Revenge]

It's not bad! Definitely not Krinkels level, but that's not what you were going for - no one is that good - It's story driven, which is nice since people don't always want just random killing. People gotta have SOME story to keep them in and you did that nicely. However, your animation was very choppy, and most actions that Kage did were very quick and never got to be seen, like when he snapped the neck of the guard in front of the first building, it just looked like he stretched him for less than a second until his head teleported backwards and he fell down, all of these actions together lasting less than two seconds. Work on your animation and all will be well.

Madnesscrazy123 responds:

Thank you for the review, I will improve

[Mario and ADHD]

Heheheh.

I watched this a few years ago, and it's still funny. Dane Cook's quotes when he yells are sometimes awful in context, but they're put to good use in this movie.

[Madness: Inprisonation]

Krinkels-worthy.

Couldn't be better.

SL4Y3Rftw responds:

I reckon I could do better :)

Thanks anyway!!!

[Madness Psychosis]

Okay.

It's good, but it's not... Suspensefully correct. He never reloads, he only runs out of ammo when a better gun arrives, etc. He needs to have a challenge. Hank isn't god, Hank is skillfull. This guy is portrayed as god.

[George Washington]

I love it!

Thanks for making it! The only reason I gave a nine was because on some faces, there were signs of simple tracing. If there were a few less lines skipped (Of the small amount I saw) in the details.

P.S. I live in Alabama, and this is fucking funny, y'all.