Your art style is a bit satirical and funny, but bad story, bad exhibition, and it seems to be in another language. Wasn't very funny. I suggest, in the future, making jokes come at the viewer just a bit faster. In quicker succession, that is, And make them quick little quirks. Take a look at Oney's "Dragonzball PP." The funny bits are so small, but there are so damn many. Like little face changes, messing up names, failing to say words, and even a millisecond shot of Freeza landing on Vegeta and squeezing his ass. Don't copy Oney's work or anything, just have the "humorous" aspect be quicker, less vulgar, and make more sense.